Showing posts with label Everliving. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Everliving. Show all posts

Friday, September 19, 2014

Sticking Up for Nice Guys and Other Writing Endeavors

The reviews for A Very Plain Young Man continue to trickle in, but at least the trickle is made up of drops of glacier-pure watery goodness filtered for thousands of years until all the impurities are gone. Both Austenprose.com and Austenesque Reviews gave the book 5 stars, to my utter delight, and there all the excitement peaked.

Although Meredith of Austenesque urged one of the commenters to "hurry, catch up before Book 3 comes out," I'm sorry to report I'm only on Chapter 7 of said WIP because of TWO MAJOR DEVELOPMENTS which I'll get to...

Hugh Hapgood, rocking the plot twists [pic from NYTimes.com]
I will say that there were a few reviewers who were glad that Elfrida chose Frederick (hope that wasn't a spoiler--this is the Romance genre, after all, not known for pulling the rug out under readers!) because Cousin Hugh was "old" and "boring." "Old"!!! "Boring"???!!!! The very idea. I happen to like Hugh Hapgood, and it's not his fault he's not as youthful or playful as Frederick Tierney, and how could he be, when he couldn't help his age and we were not able to hear the story from his POV?

Nor was Hugh Hapgood the first of my fictional rejected suitors to be criticized. In my debut novel Mourning Becomes Cassandra, similar comments were made about Cass's co-worker James, whom I absolutely loved. What was not to love about a kind, persistent, impulsive ex-nerd who was employed and didn't live in his parents' basement? Were Hugh and James too nice, in a world where nice=bland?

Having always liked nice guys myself, I'm letting Hugh Hapgood have his revenge because Hugh Hapgood is the love interest in Book 3 of the Hapgoods of Bramleigh series. Poor widowed Hugh with his three motherless children! If ever a fellow needed a romance-writer to take charge of his life, it's him. And I have picked him out the loveliest wife...

But, as I was saying, the writing is proceeding slowly because of those TWO MAJOR DEVELOPMENTS.


Development Numero Uno:
I got a job. Part-time, three days a week, assistant to a private career coach in Seattle. If you're trying to figure out what to do with your life, or how to get back into the workforce, or how to switch career gears, Elizabeth is the person you want to talk to. I love hearing people's stories, and tomorrow I even get to participate in one of her Tools for Transition Career Workshops!

Development Numero Due:
I've been hired as a ghostwriter. I'm not kidding. I suppose, after having written a ghost story, it's only fitting that I try my hand at ghostwriting. While I've only committed to trying out a chapter or two (20ish pages), if it works for both of us I may go the distance. I'm pretty excited about both the story and the challenge. The freeing thing about already having a few books with your name on them (however obscure they may be), is that you don't much care if the next thing you write has somebody else's name on it!

But I'll finish Book 3 in any case, in the little nooks and crannies of life. And then get to Book 4, of course, because how could I not tell Miss Margaret Hapgood's story? Although I might pull a switcheroo and make Book 4 Miss Edith Hapgood's story because that idea is firmer in my mind. Maybe Margaret might marry last...And then I'm already thinking about some of those cousins, Hugh Hapgood's children.

Thank you for your readership and patience, all 100 or so of you. I'll keep you in the loop!

Tuesday, February 12, 2013

John, Anne, Jane, and Michael

Hearty thanks to Marianne and her book club for hosting me and Everliving last night. Loved the questions, the conversation, and the "turtle fondue" of chocolate, caramel and pecans!

For those of you always on the lookout for new book club best practices, Marianne's group copies discussion questions (from the book or online), cuts them out, puts them in a bowl, and has everyone draw one. Kinda fun! But even funner was the meeting they had for Ayn Rand's The Fountainhead, where everyone was assigned a character to dress up as. Brilliant idea, and one I'll suggest to my own book club when we meet tonight. We are tackling Watership Down soon, after all, and what better revenge for me to take than to make everyone dress up as talking rabbits?

Of course, my favorite discussion question, as I've mentioned before, is to have the readers "cast" the book. Marianne's group gets points for originality because they picked John Corbett (thank you, IMDB) for Ben
Hmm...I can picture it.
and Anne Hathaway for Daphne.
Especially perfect for a musical version of EVERLIVING
 Lovely! I'll have to check out this John Corbett, but I do think Anne Hathaway would be every bit as haunting a Daphne as another frequent choice, Emily Blunt.

It was great to revisit Everliving for another reason because I've been buried in Jane Austen lately, prepping for a "Jane Austen book club" a friend and I auctioned off for Eastside Academy and also my upcoming side session for the Seattle University Search for Meaning Book Festival. Check out my Jane slide:


Exciting stuff. Had to figure out how to flip Jane's pic in Microsoft Paint because I wanted her facing inward to the presentation like she actually wanted to be there.

And finally I promised you a Michael. One of the gals at the book club last night was married to a band promoter who had done stints working in a record store and playing in a band. Perfect segue to Mr. Chabon's new novel Telegraph Avenue, which he'll be talking about at the Search for Meaning keynote.

Do hope you can join us on Saturday, March 9! I've got an early bird session at 9:00-9:45, which I much prefer to the slot I had last time, post keynote, after everyone has heard the Big Star and headed off to find lunch. They do require you print tickets at home, and big Michael is supposedly already "Sold Out," but they encourage us to come anyhow, given the high proportion of flake-hood in our culture. Hope to see you!


Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Blessed Are the Meek Authors

For they shall occasionally be blessed in the shadow the great. At least, I think that's how that verse goes.

Last night I got to hang out with Roxanne's awesome book club as they discussed my Everliving. Nice little ghost story for an October meeting. My thirteen-year-old asked, "But what if they didn't like the book? They can't say that if you're there." I told her that I would come late, so everyone would have plenty of time to vent, and leave early if it looked like they still had more to say. Roxanne assured me, however, this consideration wouldn't be necessary because they were a pretty honest group. And right off the bat, dear Linda proved her right by saying she didn't like the book! The problem was, to my relief, a generic consideration. Linda was not a paranormal fan. Fair enough.

But besides beverages, yummy food, and lively discussion, it was a thrill to be there because their group had been meeting for 11+ years! They had originally been formed at random by Park Place Books, and they had gelled and powered on all this time. Roxanne handed me a list of 130 books that they had read since their inception (!!!) which bowled me over for three reasons:
  1. That is just way too organized. My own book club, which has been meeting in some form for probably nine years, just recently started a Goodreads group site, and we have been wracking our brains with limited success to remember every book.
  2. Some books get read by just about everyone. Seriously. Those fortunate authors who make the must-read book-club lists are sitting pretty. The Help? Check. Cutting for Stone? Check. Life of Pi? Check. To Kill a Mockingbird? Check. The Glass Castle? Check. Check check check. I'd say Roxanne's list had at least a 30% overlap with my book club's.
  3. Piddly little me made their list! How awesome is that? There I sit, just as legitimately on that list as Jonathan Franzen, Edith Wharton, and Cormac McCarthy. And I only got Linda's thumbs-down, not the unanimous drubbing given Drinking Coffee Elsewhere. Score.
Roxanne's list also gave me some great books to add to my own to-read pile and some to avoid. Thanks, ladies and one gentleman.

Worrying about piddly authors following him around
Speaking of crouching in the gigantic shadows cast by famous authors, Seattle U invited me to do a session at their 2013 Search for Meaning Book Festival, where the keynote speaker is...drumroll, please...Michael Chabon! Yikes almighty! Michael "Yiddish Policeman's Union" Chabon. Michael "Adventures of Kavalier & Clay" Chabon. That means, when I'm not delivering my modest talk on Jane Austen and The Beresfords to ten people in a side room, and when I'm not pinned to the book-signing table next to a bestselling author, I can stalk him!


I accepted the invitation to be an author-stalker with hesitation, having struggled some in the past at the book festival, but I think we would all agree that lessons in humility are valuable, if unpleasant. Bring it on.

So put Saturday, March 3, on your calendar. You'll hear more from me (like what my session will actually be about). And as we get closer, I'll be sure to do another begging post.

Friday, August 31, 2012

Of Bigfoot and Banana Slugs -- or, What Really Goes on in the Redwoods

Looking upward in Stout Grove
Several readers of my ghost story Everliving said they were inspired to make a pilgrimage to the California redwoods, and, having never been beyond Santa Cruz's Big Basin myself, I thought I should add myself to that number. If I was going to write about it, I might as well visit.

The kids and I tootled down to Jedediah Smith Redwoods State Park via Grants Pass, Oregon, and by the time we navigated the shady, twisting road, the nine-year-old was leaning over the ferns when we got out, trying not to barf. I am happy to report she was successful, but it was touch-and-go. I administered the motion-sickness medicine retroactively and forbade further play on the DS while driving.

We stopped at Stout Grove for two reasons: (1) it's a fabulous example of old growth redwood forest; and (2) the "hike" that takes you through it is a piddly 0.6 miles and flat as a kitchen table. If you like awe-inspiring ancient trees, look no further. If you like awe-inspiring ancient trees and a heck of a lot of ferns, you'll think you've died and gone to heaven. There were so many ferns that I kept expecting a dinosaur to tromp out of the woods because it looked like every kid picture you've ever seen of the dinosaur habitat, minus a swamp or two and swooping pterodactyl.

See what I mean? Ferns.

You can easily picture Gladys wheeling Ben along just such a path after she gave him a good spray with the mosquito repellent! This was, in fact, the only trail of three we hiked that seemed plagued by mosquitoes. Had she taken him along the Trillium Falls Trail in Prairie Creek State Park, on the other hand, the wheelchair would have squashed innumerable banana slugs! We lost count after about twenty. Banana slugs on the ground, on the ferns, on tree trunks. Ergh.


 This fella right here might have been Grand Daddy himself, minus the tilt, but there were plenty of candidates. One tree was so enormous in diameter that my three children, with linked arms outspread, could only circle the half of it. And because we accidentally took the Stout Grove loop counterclockwise, we did our share of wandering off trail and over and along fallen trees before we finally noticed a little sign (pointing the other way, for those taking the loop clockwise) that adjured hikers to "please stay on trail." Oops.

On one of our illicit off-trail jaunts we climbed over a fallen giant, and the kids were amazed to find all the things growing along the trunk. It made me think of the canopy, unreachable to us, with its own ecosystem and flora. Since I have no canopy shot, I have this dull one which is secretly exciting, if you think about how the soil and mulch and plants are all growing right atop the wood, just as they would be in the canopy:


We had a great visit, and I absolutely recommend making the trip. I only wish we'd had time to stop at the roadside stand along 101 called "Legend of Bigfoot." It was understandably packed.

But we had places to go, people to see, including this little fella at Lisa's book party:

Unlike the dog, Lisa did not nip me on the finger. Instead she opened her home and provided great company and treats and beverages. A wonderful evening. Thank you so much, Lisa, and everyone who came. Hope you all enjoy the books! Kathy, who had just finished reading Everliving, had a question on it even I hadn't thought about, nor had I ever been asked. Still thinking about what the answer might be and probably have to go back and reread...!

Speaking of rereading and of ghost stories and mystery/thrillers, I did pick up a Lois Duncan re-issue this month. Remember Lois Duncan? If not, these covers might ring a bell:

and

and let's not forget

There were more. Killing Mr. Griffin and I Know What You Did Last Summer. I scarfed them up in my pre-teen and teen years, whenever I needed a good thrill. So I couldn't resist when I saw one I'd never read on NetGalley.



The cover, sadly, doesn't live up to the glory of those vintage ones. But I enjoyed the book. For fellow fans, here's the complete review from Goodreads:
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Like legions of others, I was a Lois Duncan fan back in the day, so I was thrilled to see a "new" release from her on NetGalley. Would she have aged as well as, say, the Betsy-Tacy series--equally wonderful to reread as an adult?

The answer is yes and no. The Twisted Window follows the story of A mysterious boy who appears at Tracy's high school, eager to recruit her for an equally mysterious task. The Twilight-esque cafeteria scene sucked me in and the quick pace kept me pressing the Next Page button. Intriguing plot and nice pacing and suspense.

What worked less for me was the character development and eventual explanation. I would have liked to see more between Tracy and her father, and the whole bit about her mother felt thrown in. As for Brad, how on earth did he get to where he was? (Sorry--vague--trying to avoid spoilers.)

On the whole I enjoyed the book and read it lickety-split. Give it a better cover and title (how about "Distortion"?) and I think Duncan will attract plenty of new fans and resurrect her oeuvre.

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One interesting note about Lois Duncan thrillers versus today's YA fare: Duncan's were all set in the "real" world. No postapocalyptic this, no dystopian that, nobody sucking anybody's blood. Just plain old people misbehaving. Makes me quite nostalgic.

In any case, please excuse the long post (if you've stuck with me this far). I think it'd had been an eon since my last one. My only excuse, I suppose, is that I was on redwood time.




Friday, August 3, 2012

Halfway Honest Book Reviews

Slate ran an article today on how all our connections in cyberspace and the Twittersphere and such make it difficult to give honest (read, critical) book reviews. After all, if you follow people and think they're darling and tag their Twitter handles whenever you mention them, how can you say something awful about their book? Everyone knows we are kinder to those we know than to those we don't, even if "knowing" someone in the cyber sense is only a pale reflection of an actual relationship.
Follow her on Twitter, but loved her book--honestly!

I'm totally guilty of avoiding bad book reviews. Not just of "friends," but of all writers. Why? A couple reasons:

1. With Google nowadays, you can't mention any writer without it getting back to him, and I've had that come back to bite me--even when I wasn't saying anything specifically critical about the book. Honestly, I'd prefer people not to hate me and hate on my books out of "revenge."

2. From reviews of my own books, I've come to realize that different reading tastes do not an awful book make. Yes, some books are genuinely poorly written (I've run across a few that make me laugh out loud in their awfulness), but most I dislike are just not to my taste. I still remember the person on Goodreads who read my Everliving and crapped on it because s/he didn't like ghost stories or romance. My recommendation: stay out of the paranormal romance genre in the future, or risk further frustration.

This one annoyed me, but, hey--he's dead.
So I've reached a compromise in my book reviewing. I only review it if I can give it 3 stars or more, unless the author is dead (and presumably infinitely beyond such things as piddly book reviews). Which is why, if you're a friend on Goodreads, you'll sometimes see me "Currently Reading" something, only to never hear about it again. If my cyber lips are sealed after I claimed to be reading it, that means I didn't like it. Rather than leave a negative review, I just delete it from my Goodreads profile. No harm, no foul.

Occasionally I receive advance copies to review, and I give the publishers the same allowance. Meaning, if I don't like the book, I tell them so privately, offering the option to still review it. Don't some people think there's no such thing as bad publicity? Apparently they do. So far not a one has written back, "No, please--do go ahead and trash the book!"

It's a compromise, yes. You don't know how many times I've thought of making up a phony profile, so that I could leave honest reviews on books I was not so crazy about. But I've decided the world--and the Internet in particular--already has enough negativity to go around. It doesn't need my two cents'.

If only criticizing weren't such fun! At least, with the NBC coverage of the Olympics, there are still plenty of things to find fault with besides books...

Tuesday, June 12, 2012

For My Shyer Readers (Help me out?)

Be one of Frannie's champions?
Recently we were polling new members at our summer swim club about how they heard about us and why they joined. The overwhelming reply: the pool was recommended by friends. All the fancy schmancy marketing in the world can't begin to touch word-of-mouth.

As a self-published author, all marketing is up to me and I'm learning as I go, but I've discovered the wonders of word-of-mouth apply even more in the world of books. Especially in the world of books. My readers fall into a few buckets:

  1. Those who read and are willing to post a review in a public forum (usually Amazon or a blog mention). This, sadly for me, is the smallest contingent (2%?). (You know who you are, and I kiss you.) I had no idea public writing struck fear to the hearts of many. Public speaking, yes, but public writing?

  2. Those who read and will give it a star-rating on Goodreads. No review, but a rating. I appreciate it, since at least their friends see it, and it adds to the ratings data. Again, this constitutes a handful of people (1%?).

  3. Those who stop me in passing or shoot me a quick email/text to tell me they liked the book. Don't get me wrong. I am deeply appreciative, and it always makes my day, but marketingwise it doesn't go any further. (20% or more?)

  4. The silent others. Granted, if they hated the book, it's probably best they keep silent. Or, I suppose, they never read it, in which case I really can't count them as readers. Hmm... (75% of the pie)


I came across an interesting re-post this morning that inspired me to take keyboard in hand and type this post for you because it had lovely suggestions for my shyer readers. If you enjoyed The Beresfords or Everliving or Mourning Becomes Cassandra or The Littlest Doubts or Mia and the Magic Cupcakes, would you consider letting someone else know?



  • Post a link to the book on your Facebook page. Don't have to say much--just something like, "Need a summer read? I liked this one!" (One minute option.)

  • Tweet about the book! (30 second option) Whenever I read something I would give 4 stars or higher, I tweet about it and do a Goodreads rating and post.

  • Pin a copy of the book cover on your Pinterest page. Confession: I don't do Pinterest, but I'm guessing this would be another 30-second operation.

  • Lend your copy out to someone you think might enjoy it. I don't mind. Maybe that person will love writing a public review. :) (No time at all!)

  • Suggest it for your book club. I love to visit. Depending on your book club, this might be quick and painless to do, or you might have to prepare an oral report and be ready to do battle.

  • Give a copy as a gift. Guess what all my kids' teachers are getting in a couple weeks? Uh-huh. They got Mia and the Magic Cupcakes for Christmas, so it's The Beresfords for spring.

  • Invite friends to my next bookstore signing and go out for a meal/drink afterward. I'll be at University Book Store Bellevue on Wednesday, July 18, at 6:30. Walking distance to Zeek's Pizza, Black Bottle, and countless other fun places.
If you have other quick and easy and painless ideas to help me out, be sure to mention them in the comments. I so appreciate you all!

Tuesday, March 13, 2012

The Bear is First

They even have one on tap called Delirium Tremens!
Hearty thanks to Ace and her book club for reading Everliving this month! It was my first book club visit at a restaurant (of sorts), Redmond's Malt and Vine. I'm not much of a beer drinker, so I couldn't do the hundreds of offerings justice, but I enjoyed a hard cider and the company.

The liquor lubricated the already-sharp mental instincts of the group (I mean that in all sincerity), and we had a great discussion about whether or not Daphne the ghost showed any "development," whether or not Gladys was "faking it," why Carson Keller did what he did at the end, and why little Noah saw what he saw. It turns out one of the women's had a tree-canopy-studying botanist for a sister, and a father who had been a psychiatrist at Napa State Hospital! Should have dedicated this book to Lisa, clearly.

One of the funniest moments was when they asked me about my up-and-coming book. When I told them the title was The Beresfords, Laura asked, "The Bear is First?" Ha ha! Maybe, if all else fails, I could market The Bear is First as a Berenstain Bears fan-fiction, or a memorial tribute to Jan Berenstain, who recently passed away.

Speaking of The Beresfords, I just signed off on the front cover (!). The ball in rolling. Look for launch parties in late April or early May, and shoot me a message if you'd like to host a party and get your copy free!

Monday, January 9, 2012

Amazon...Because I'm Worthless?


Strangely, I'm not in this picture



This weekend was a perfect storm of ebook marketing research, from which I was able to draw one clear, immediate conclusion: My Books are Worthless.

Let me explain.

1. Amazon started a new program for its authors called "KDP Select." Under this program, you sell your ebook exclusively on Kindle (i.e., not on Nook) for 3 months. In return, you get to...offer your book for free five days in that 3-month period. Huh? As far as I could see, they offered no publicity for you. Just the chance to make ZERO off your book for five days. I know--you can't blame me for being tempted. I signed up Everliving and took it off Nook.


2.I've mentioned before that sales of all my books slowed to a trickle, making me think that my more-than-self-sustaining "hobby" was going to become like most hobbies, a drain on the wallet. If that was going to be the case, I wanted to see if price was an issue. Were people unwilling to try a new author (or a friend's latest book) because $2.99 was a deal-breaker??? Far be it from me to stand between people and great beach reads for the price of a cup of coffee.

3. I scheduled Everliving to be free on Kindle Saturday, January 7 and Sunday, January 8. Then I sent off emails to my favorite bargain Kindle book sites, DailyCheapReads, Pixel of Ink, and Kindle on the Cheap. It turned out only Kindle on the Cheap sent out an announcement, the other two sites perhaps being up to their necks in free ebooks and not in need of another.

4. On Saturday, January 7, Kindle on the Cheap posted about Everliving, and the "sales" started rolling in. I didn't check every hour, but the sales ranking peak I noticed at 7:09P was #160 on the Free list in Kindle/ #6 in Contemporary Fiction/ and #41 in Romance. These are stratospheric heights for a small-peanuts author like me, and the ranking translated to 2,772 copies "sold" on Saturday. (Royalties = $0)

5. On Sunday, January 8, the Kindle Nation Daily promotion I had scheduled back in June finally ran (five days after it was originally scheduled to run, which meant that, instead of getting a sales spike at $2.99, I got the sales spike at $0). The "Weekender" emailing ensured that Everliving stayed in the rankings. Again, I didn't check all the time (because I was watching the Broncos-Steelers game), but I caught a 1:11P sales ranking peak of #118 in Free in Kindle/ #4 in Contemporary Fiction/ and #30 in Romance. Yay! This translated to "sales" of 1,197 copies. Again, Royalties = $0.

What can I conclude from all this? That a few thousand people, with prompting, are happy to give my book a try for free, but far fewer are willing to do so at $2.99. I suppose some of the free-readers might so fall in love with me that they read my other books, but on the other hand, why bother, if they can just move on to the next free ebook? Who wants to fork out $2.99, if there are a bazillion free books to read?

Don't get me wrong--I love free books as much as the next person. There's a reason I'm trolling those sites and get most books at the library. But as an author, it does make me think I could do much, much better if I bagged groceries at the local market.

Oh, well. Back to Chapter 27 of the WIP...